I scatter myself to gather again,
Trying to seek the pieces lost in the way.
In quest for a new abode, a new plain,
I scatter myself to gather again.
To resurrect the moments discord has slain,
In order to let the harmony, finally, stay.
I scatter myself to gather again,
Trying to seek the pieces lost in the way.
P.S. :- This is an attempt at Triolete form of poetry where in the rhyme scheme is ABaAabAB.
Written for United Poet's Vice Versa#10 challenge.
Trying to seek the pieces lost in the way.
In quest for a new abode, a new plain,
I scatter myself to gather again.
To resurrect the moments discord has slain,
In order to let the harmony, finally, stay.
I scatter myself to gather again,
Trying to seek the pieces lost in the way.
P.S. :- This is an attempt at Triolete form of poetry where in the rhyme scheme is ABaAabAB.
Written for United Poet's Vice Versa#10 challenge.
The message of your poem is something I think we all can relate to. Sometimes we DO have to gather ourselves together again after discord disrupts our lives!
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Thank u Mary. It was my pleasure to participate in Vice/Versa.
DeleteBeautiful! It is a very complicated rhyme pattern you have chosen, and I am impressed by it. And the poem is nice.
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Thank u!!! :)
DeleteVery nice triolete too. It's always good to find that balance in our lives.
ReplyDeleteThat balance is the only thing which can bring about the total harmony. Thank u for encouragement.
DeleteI really like this...quite relatable. Nicely done!
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DeleteThis is lovely!
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DeleteThe thoughts that are weaved here are beautiful....
ReplyDeleteThank u Sreeja. :)
DeleteNicely done, Laxmi! The first and the last two lines cover the entire message beautifully. :)
ReplyDeleteGreat new form, LC! It's nice to reflect and check again and again. It'll just take seconds but avoids heartache for a life time!
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